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Post by porymaster on Dec 21, 2008 22:05:26 GMT -4
well heres my comic. episode 1:  eposode 2:  |
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Post by Kiroshi on Dec 22, 2008 16:58:02 GMT -4
<_< its "eh?" and look at your spelling, your 1st comic looked kinda noobish, but it'll get better.
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Post by B-MAN on Dec 22, 2008 20:43:27 GMT -4
I suggest making it more exciting. When you can have "Hey, let's have a battle" you can say "I challenge you NOW!" or "I bet I beat you, you wimp!" or something along those lines.
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Post by LhikJovan on Dec 23, 2008 2:29:17 GMT -4
Haha squirtle got nuked... and I don't mean microwaved...
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Post by Kiroshi on Dec 23, 2008 12:32:21 GMT -4
And make all of the comic boxes squared up, and don't leave any empty space on the side like on the first one XD
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Post by LhikJovan on Dec 23, 2008 14:49:25 GMT -4
Or make a panel take up 2 box spaces for larger panels.
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Post by porymaster on Dec 23, 2008 20:05:42 GMT -4
yeah on the first 1 I had smaller panels cuz i had a small pic of oaks lab and one of the speech bubbles went out of a panel
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Post by porymaster on Jan 7, 2009 21:59:00 GMT -4
also Bman generic female rival trainer isnt the kind of person to say "I Bet I could beat you wimp!"
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Post by B-MAN on Jan 8, 2009 19:05:06 GMT -4
also Bman generic female rival trainer isnt the kind of person to say "I Bet I could beat you wimp!" In the games yes, but have you seen how May acts in Pokemon Special manga? |
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Post by porymaster on Jan 8, 2009 20:02:17 GMT -4
pokemon special manga?
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