ssvegeta12's try at scratches

[ssvegeta12]

well here is my first ever scratch, I don't think it's that good, well here it is.



moves
-tackle
3-growl
8-absorb
13-leach sead
20-rock throw
32-razor leaf
45-giga drain
66-

type: rock/grass

I know the outline is kinda messed up.

heres it's evolution



moves
-tackle
-growl
7-absorb
13-bullet seed
15-leach seed
19-rock throw
23-roll out
33-razor leaf
45-giga drain
66-rock storm (a move that only this pokemon, and it's evo can learn

this wasn't what I was hoping for it to turn out like. I think it's horrible.



the final evo



moves
-tackl
-growl
7-absorb
14-bullet sead
17-leach sead
20-rock throw
25-rollout
34-razor leaf
40-giga drain
52-rock storm
80-leaf blow

any ideas for names?

time to start fire


-tackle
-lear
9-ember
13-fire spin
20-headbut
32-flamethrower
41-fire blast
60-volcano meltdown (another made up move)

that one has no name as well (no it isn't based off a pig)

[B-MAN]

Seems very very basic, needs more qualities and features and it looks a little weird.

[ssvegeta12]

yeah it does look weird I'll try editing it later but for now I'm finishing it's evolution.

[aero003]

your shading is a tad off keep it up though

[ssvegeta12]

I'm working on the evo to the fire one, this is all I have right now



I'm choosing the colors now.

[Stapler]

Hey, good try ssvegeta12.

One hint for you. After you draw your outline, use the magnifying glass to zoom in and, using an eraser or white pixel, make it so the outline is always one pixel thick.

[ssvegeta12]

thank's for the advice, I'll remember that when I finish making the evo to my fire pokemon.

[ssvegeta12]

wooh finished



moves
same as first evo

type:fire

any ideas for names?

[aero003]

well i will gove some addvice: you might want to make his flame look more umm flame looking and also his legs are kinda stubby and just there, and work a little bit on shading
.

BUT keep up the hard work

[aero003]

oh on a sidenote i edited your second evo it took my about 4-5 min with all the editting

anyways it may not be great cause i'm really tired and this is just an edit.



i also gave it a a kinda like hippo feel to it

[ssvegeta12]

awesome! And thank you for the advice . I liked how you added the spark from the fire!

[aero003]

lol thanks i'm not as good as stapler but i do try

[Ariados]

i like them but one bit of advice: make them a bit more 3-D. thats what i'm told sometimes.

[LhikJovan]

I think a larger palette would do your sprites justice. Also, try and shade so that the light comes from the top-left. That's how most of the real sprites are.


Good designs.