Story for new game

[pokechamp]

aero and i will be posting the story here. feel free to post any ideas or comments or critasism.thank you!

[Kiroshi]

criticism not critasism. thats my criticism.

[pokechamp]

im a bad speller.

[pokechamp]

so lets begin.

[Kiroshi]

well first we post all the roles of the main charachters roles so we know how to order the story and where to put everyone.

[pokechamp]

i'm working on it

[pokechamp]

stapler: the rival in the game. he shows the main character(aero) around town and then goes into tall grass just for fun. aero chases after him so he doesn't get in trouble. stapler then screams because a wild (a normal type pokemon) pops out of the grass and corners both aero and stapler. when all hope is lost a voice is heard."stop (the normal type pkmn)!you two, catch this suitcase!" prof. clark(the proffeser in the game) throws a brown suitcase at the two boys and in them were three pokeballs.

[pokechamp]

and you get what happens next.

[Kiroshi]

um no. he doesn't throw a suit case. that's tard. like someone just randomly pops out and throws you a case? how about they're in trouble and the professor saves them with a raptoroot then gives starters to them later because they have no pokemon to protect themselves.

[Kiroshi]

and he doesnt say stop(normal pkmn)! thats also tard. how about he just battles it?

[pokechamp]

well it won't be nice if we say the prof got a starter. and i thought about the other rival having a poke and saving them but then she would be getting a starter which ruins everything.

[pokechamp]

or how about the town gets attacked by two beggining pokmn. like starly in d/p.

[pokechamp]

and then they go to the prof's lab but no one's there so they steal a pokeball, and use them in a double battle and beat the invading pkmn

[pokechamp]

the prof then comes back with his student (the other rival) and the rest is the same in d/p.

[pokechamp]

he comes from researching the grand tree(like the lake in d/p. post a name forthe tree plz)